Lesson Five – Story Editing

This English teaching pack for Key Stage Two gets the children to explain and model how to edit and improve a narrative story that uses conflict and resolution based on a work of fiction by a significant author.
The class can practise redrafting their narrative writing to ensure consistent grammar and exciting vocabulary choices when describing what could happen when travelling in a giant fruit.
Download this teaching pack including a lesson plan, classroom activities and an interactive presentation to explain and model how to edit and improve a narrative story that uses conflict and resolution based on a work of fiction by a significant author
Activities in this teaching pack include a worksheet to check and redraft a narrative story to ensure consistent grammar and exciting vocabulary choices when composing a story based on a work of fiction by a significant author about travelling in a giant fruit.
The interactive presentation gets the children to explore how to edit and improve a narrative story that uses conflict and resolution based on a book by a significant author.
This lesson is part of an English scheme of work to get the children to plan and write a narrative story based on a book by a significant author, build words by adding the suffix ly and extend sentences using fronted adverbials. There are teaching activities for shared learning, differentiated worksheets to support independent learning and interactive presentations to introduce concepts and key skills.
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